Sheer blackness enshrounded forever in nothing, engulfing all that exists.
A motionless void--blank, untouched...
But from these depths arises a shapeless form, blurred and smudged.
Its proportions indefinite; intangible and unseen.
It stumbles awkwardly towards the blinding light and begins to take shape.
Chiseled and molded by traces of imagination--
Transformation takes place, a grim metamorphosis.
It now takes form, crude and wild in appearance, yet still fragile.
The light approaches quickly, guiding the gruesome creature
It crawls ever so slowly towards freedom, the coveted release!
Its evolution is rapid; grotesque features are replaced by smooth, sleek curves;
Streamlined, a thing of beauty!
Its progress is accelerated by a persistent force, unforgiving and impatient.
At last it is thrust through the light and revealed to the world!
A perfect treasure--the masses flock to see this wondrous creation.
A masterpiece unleashed, its maker's pride and glory.
But deep inside it festers, corrupted!
Just another speck in the whirlwind, insignificant in life as once before.
Once unique, but not extraordinary.
A creation made by one but owned by all--
It belongs to the masses now.















Comments
I really liked how ambiguously you described the "creature".
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Out from the night, from the mists steps a figure
No one really knows his name for sure
He stands at 6'6" head and shoulders
Pray he never comes knocking at your door.
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I'll WAKA LAKA one on you!!!!!!
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*Jessie aka Jesus aka courtj3st3r RIP, I love you*
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amazing icon made by the awesome ~karzi012
I wish you'd write more poetry. :3 Even if you did this for something you didn't want to do, it's really good, and does actually have a meaning to it. Most things these days are just meaningless rambles, and it's nice to find something that actually gets you thinking.
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Admin for the *BlackScythePack Deviations.
*mad lute solo!! >:3*
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<Chester-le-lunatique> I lost faith in humanity. Know why?
<Nalan-TheMuse> Why?
<Chester-le-lunatique> They created Twilight dildos -____-
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...in your pants. >__>
▄▀▄▀▄▀▄ *squee-gasm!* 8D
FERRET SEX!
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...in your pants. >__>
▄▀▄▀▄▀▄ *squee-gasm!* 8D
FERRET SEX!
I'm glad you think so, because that's exactly what I intended to do -- make the reader wonder exactly what the creature is...
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...in your pants. >__>
▄▀▄▀▄▀▄ *squee-gasm!* 8D
FERRET SEX!
This is amazing. Why didn't you tell me that you're a wizard poet as well as a genius artist?? This was really visually engaging. I like the message I got from it too. Food for thought. (:
You should post poems more often!
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Mors est tantum exordium. Illic est haud preteritus. Illic est haud posterus. Vicis est reproba. Infinitio est iam. Mors est tantum exordium.
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